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Tomoe Gozen 2005-07-29 ch 1,	I suppose you've gotten many reviews comparing your work to Harry Potter of The Wizard of Earthsea etc etc. But, I find, the plot, world, and characters are of your creation alone. Not a simple feat - to birth an entire race, endless countries, complex backstory, and memorable characters all at once. A job well done. I hope, with the very depths of my being, that you continue (eventhough it has been more than a year since you have updated). And, make good on your promise of femslash.
Aryanda 2005-02-03 ch 1,	Love it. Best fanfic, No, best STORY I've read in a while. I think I'll read it again. And then call my friends and make them read it. And read it again. Please write more. :)
Dartxni 2004-10-29 ch 1,	I like it so far. But I hope Tony and Ellsbeth meet soon.
dreamerdoll 2004-08-05 ch 1,	hello! its awesome! i love it!awesome! cant believe i never read it before...well, anyway, update very soon!
Faceless Shaddow 2004-07-27 ch 1,	I really like it Nol, keep up the great work! I can really see Sarra and my mental image of the Locorial is amazing, you really can paint pictures in your readers minds... at least mine! Let's see if you can guess who this is before you see my e-mail address let me give you a hint... Monkey!
Hidden Relevance 2004-07-20 ch 1,	oo.. i like thisa one even betta than the other.. should be good george! update soon aye?
mepb 2004-06-15 ch 1,	Hi! I love your stories @ fanfiction and so decided to read the ones you had on FP. I like it a lot! I know some of the reviews say that your characters are too bitchy, but personally it makes them a lot more interesting! You did good not to leave any loose-ends and i can't wait to see what happens!
Knight of the Apocolypse 2004-06-07 ch 1,	This is interesting! In a way, Val Mora is right, Ellsbeth is an egotistical **, and if she had kept reading Antoinette would have seemed like a dishonorable maniac, but that's kind of a good thing - they AREN'T Mary Sues, they have flaws, and therefore it will make this story better, considering the fact the main characters don't do everything perfect. Update soon, and I review ^.^
Merlin's Daughter 2004-06-05 ch 1,	This is very interesting so far! Ellsbeth sounds like a ** X.X Teehee. Update soon!
WakeRobin 2004-05-23 ch 1,	Really cool story. Great beginning. I'm really interested in reading more. Update soon!
Saharian 2004-05-23 ch 1,	Awesome first chapter, I loved it. Ellsbeth and Antoinette are awesome! You are very good at giving the character a lot of personality. Great job! I can't wait to read more so you have to update soon! Please, please, please!! ^_^ Saharian
Rubber Duck 2004-05-23 ch 1,	Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing my story on ffnet! I really like your story here! It's awesome!! I really hope to see the next chapter out soon, I really want to read the adventures you have planned! =RD
Val Mora 2004-05-21 ch 1,	I owe you an apology. My last review, when I look at it now, sounds horrendously insulting and makes it seem as though I think your writing, in a word, sucks, which is not the case at all. I think that you have people's behavior down well, but as I so ungracefully implied before, the situation and characteristics of these characters is difficult to believe. If I have hurt you in any way, and even if I haven't, I apologize.
Val Mora 2004-05-21 ch 1,	While I appreciate that your story is probably quite excellent, I'm going to tell you the truth: I couldn't even get through the entire first section. I did not, however, do what most people did: I scrolled all the way down to the bottom and clicked the review button so you'd know that I did this. Most people would probably just quit out of it. Why is this? It's because your first section is very off-putting: your main character's an egotistic snob, she hates her parents (which, while not terrible in and of itself, is distasteful because she's overly critical of them), and she's more politically astute even than they are, despite your statement that they've been doing it for a long time. Don't they have advisers? No king or queen is alone in governing - that's why England had a Parliament, and France had its Estates-General, and China had its bureaucracy. Even absolute monarchs have people giving them advice. Frankly, unless the kid's a reincarnated Machiavelli and you state just that, your characters are a little hard to swallow, and it's even harder to swallow with the way your main character walks all over her parents. This problem of your first section could probably be ameliorated if you put it elsewhere in the piece, and instead replaced it with something connected to it, but less incriminating of your main character. It doesn't do your story well to have all your readers thinking she's a snob within the first five paragraphs.
scribophile 2004-05-02 ch 1,	That was really good! I can't wait to see an update... how can you write this well? IT'S NOT FAIR! I love the twists, and I think I noticed a few TP references in there. ;) Write more soon!

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