Nice poem, great point you got across. It's been raining for like weeks and it's gotten me all gloomy, but you're right, I'll look beyond the rain next time. :)

ah that makes me smile! a happish poem. i like the theme portrayed... ah its nice :)

Hey it's raining here now, anyways your poems always seem to have an elegance about them and give off such good strong images, you're a mistress of words.

Again, this has awesome imagery...and it has a great, uplifting lesson behind it. Well done! :o)

Should I just say it? It was written well, no, terrifically and it touched my heart.