short and beautiful. Well done.
Nat

ah thats a nice image to use, it flows well ;) and thx for all those reviews, much appriciate

Oh, short (which I hate) but good! I love the comparisons and images this gives!

It has a nice little rhyming pattern if you don't listen to the words at all because once you delve deeper, it's sad and beautiful! I love the idea of having everything symbolize a different part of the sunset! Beautiful _

Vivid imagery. I especially like the ending...it kind brings this slightly morbid feeling to the overall happy poem, which is hard to pull off. Awesome work!

I get amazing images from this poem. I like it.