I'm starting to think Holly's a lil bit of an air head.

I could've used more details with the kissin' scene...7.5 out of 10PWEASE CONTINUE!!

I dig your style, please write more, oh wait there's a third chapt.8.5 out of 10

Nice story. Really cute. Try to take it deeper than a few words of emotion. You're talented. Good work!

I'm leaving a review though I do not know wether or not you will continue to write the story. I doubt it but anyway for what it's worth i think it's a great story.

I don't know knoow what to say actually. The story seems to be like a fairy tale, a bit cliche but it still good, I guess. But I like your style of writing though. Roger and Out!

uh oh...looks like Josh has some competition

nice chapter, I think Josh has good intentions

I really like this but you haven't updated in such a long time! Please update again soon.

Pretty funn story!

Poor Mark...he has to carry Josh's anger. I laughed at that part.

So Josh has a REALLY BIG CRUSH on Holly, but he's also jealous with Ethan. Holly doesn't know it at all. She is cool. I beginning liking her.

It funny when Ethan and Josh fight. It made me laughed.

Good story!! Please update more!

Great story! I'll be looking for the next chapter!

Keep up the great work!

I like it. I wanna kno what's goin to happen, plz post more soon!

Ok ... well i really loved the first two chapters but the kiss at the end of the third chapter was way too soon for my liking. I mean we don't even know whats going on with Ethan yet so throwing this in is just confusing and makes her seem like a player. I'm not trying to be rude or anything i just thought I'd let you know how I feel. But I'd still like to se what happens next so keep writing

pretty good I like it please update soon!

Huh? That was quick... Way too fast...

GREAT STORY!! UPDATE SOON!