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| Point Zero 2006-08-11 ch 3,   | I'm starting to think Holly's a lil bit of an air head. I could've used more details with the kissin' scene...7.5 out of 10PWEASE CONTINUE!! |
| Point Zero 2006-08-11 ch 2, | I dig your style, please write more, oh wait there's a third chapt.8.5 out of 10 |
| Anahid Hartoonian 2006-01-08 ch 3, | Nice story. Really cute. Try to take it deeper than a few words of emotion. You're talented. Good work! |
| Ck90 2006-01-03 ch 3, | I'm leaving a review though I do not know wether or not you will continue to write the story. I doubt it but anyway for what it's worth i think it's a great story. |
| Gigglingpixies 2005-12-13 ch 3, | I don't know knoow what to say actually. The story seems to be like a fairy tale, a bit cliche but it still good, I guess. But I like your style of writing though. Roger and Out! |
| Princesswild1 2005-12-06 ch 2, | uh oh...looks like Josh has some competition |
| Princesswild1 2005-12-06 ch 1, | nice chapter, I think Josh has good intentions |
| A.M. Angel 2005-10-21 ch 3, | I really like this but you haven't updated in such a long time! Please update again soon. |
| KaronePrincess 2005-10-10 ch 3, | Pretty funn story! Poor Mark...he has to carry Josh's anger. I laughed at that part. So Josh has a REALLY BIG CRUSH on Holly, but he's also jealous with Ethan. Holly doesn't know it at all. She is cool. I beginning liking her. It funny when Ethan and Josh fight. It made me laughed. Good story!! Please update more! |
| xdancedestinyxox 2005-10-04 ch 3, | Great story! I'll be looking for the next chapter! Keep up the great work! |
| Princesswild1 2005-10-02 ch 3, | I like it. I wanna kno what's goin to happen, plz post more soon! |
| mipster 2005-07-30 ch 3, | Ok ... well i really loved the first two chapters but the kiss at the end of the third chapter was way too soon for my liking. I mean we don't even know whats going on with Ethan yet so throwing this in is just confusing and makes her seem like a player. I'm not trying to be rude or anything i just thought I'd let you know how I feel. But I'd still like to se what happens next so keep writing |
| fireangel26 2005-07-12 ch 3, | pretty good I like it please update soon! |
| beautymarked 2005-07-09 ch 3, | Huh? That was quick... Way too fast... |
| Pretty Lost 2005-06-07 ch 3, | GREAT STORY!! UPDATE SOON! |