|Reviews for The Path|
| mmoonsshiner 7/29/04 . chapter 1
though alot of my poems deal with pathways and other refrences to the cycle of life and death i have never written anything as morbid and hopeless as this and i must say i truely like people including myself focus on some joyful ending to this path while you blatantly state the reality of the journey. very well written.
| Aishestel 7/3/04 . chapter 1
It's sad.. Well written as usual ;-)
One does feel like this when there is no hope...
Keep it up!
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/10/04 . chapter 1
thats sad! *sniff* wow tho, wow!
| invalid id 4/25/04 . chapter 1
Love the repetition here, it further gets the point across. I've said this a lot but you have a unique style and it's different than anything on this site.
| Faithrss 4/24/04 . chapter 1
I love your use of harsh alliteration in this poem. It emphasises the monotonus despair of life, good work.
| WakeRobin 4/24/04 . chapter 1
This flows amazingly. I really love this. Thanks for putting me on your fav list. :) Keep writing!
| UnwantedMisery 4/24/04 . chapter 1
Great poem, very mysterious, but great nonetheless.
Keep it up!
| Horseridergrl 4/24/04 . chapter 1
Oh, this is a cool poem! One of the most...mysterious poems I have ever read! Well-written.