though alot of my poems deal with pathways and other refrences to the cycle of life and death i have never written anything as morbid and hopeless as this and i must say i truely like people including myself focus on some joyful ending to this path while you blatantly state the reality of the journey. very well written.
Nat

It's sad.. Well written as usual ;-)
One does feel like this when there is no hope...
Keep it up!

thats sad! *sniff* wow tho, wow!

Love the repetition here, it further gets the point across. I've said this a lot but you have a unique style and it's different than anything on this site.

I love your use of harsh alliteration in this poem. It emphasises the monotonus despair of life, good work.

This flows amazingly. I really love this. Thanks for putting me on your fav list. :) Keep writing!

Great poem, very mysterious, but great nonetheless.
Keep it up!

Oh, this is a cool poem! One of the most...mysterious poems I have ever read! Well-written.