Great story! Really cute and adorable. I got kinda annoyed at Holly for always giving Vic ideas on what to do with Will, but I guess it's all good in the end.

Cheers,
TQL

:: His grip on me once again tightened. He even shook me a little bit. "Holly…" He whispered, "I was so… torn… I felt so guilty…. I thought I was betraying you when…." He took a moment before continuing. And when he was ready, he lifted up his hand and gently turned my face to look at his. "I thought I was betraying you when I fell in love with you… as you are now…. I thought I was being a horrible person…. I felt so guilty, so awful… When really all along… I was falling in love with you all over again…." ::

God, woman! You genius! I was supposed to review after I read the whole thing but after reading this paragraph, Oh God, I just had to review now. I loved this so much. I don't know, maybe because there's so much emotion on these words or because it was said with such honesty; whatever it was, I couldn't stop myself from crying. Well, done. Really. Loved it so much. 3

Awww, I absolutely loved this story! It is one of my favorites!

NOOOOO! I want them together! Geez, first story in a long time I honestly don't know how it will end which is good and frustrating thing lol...

great chapter...very sad still hoping they get together tho...love the quotes...

Finally, you were killing me slowly lol...great story off to read more..

Just so you know you are killing me slowly lol...I want them two to get together...amazing story by the way...

Awww, this chapter was so sad...I want them together lol...I absolutely love this story!

Ahhhhhhhhhh so goodddd! I don't know what people talking about you being sloppy! I thought everything fit in perfectly! VERY CUTE AND AMAZING STORY!

Please keep writing!

Best wishes.

wow, its my second time reading this and it still kills me to read and holly and will. it was heartbreaking to see them dance around each other with restraints. even though u say that u arent an amazing writer yet, u still did a pretty good job at describing the feelings and the situations between holly and will.

'Wow! I'm finally done reading ALL the CHAPTERS within 24 hours..haha.! :) I only had a limited hours of sleeping because of school works and final exams but i spent it by reading this fic..! HEHE! :D I SUPER DUPER LOVE IT! Congratulations for this wonderful and dramatic fic.! :D I really enjoy reading this even though you made me cry a lot of times. Keep up the good work.! :D

I love Will and Holly..they're such a perfect couple. I love them.! :)) I hate Vic but after what she did, I mean letting go of Will and being understanding, I finally like her. I hope she find a right guy for her, maybe James will do.! :)

Anyways, I'm sorry if i didn't review each chapter..maybe if i came here around the time when you still writing this fic, I AM.! :) And i'm too excited to read the next chapter to leave a review..hehe..so yeah.! :)) Congratulations again and Until next time.! :))

Oh gosh! You're being too humble on yourself! The story was really really good! You portrayed the characters so well in terms of their actions and emotions. One of my favourite stories here in FP. Wouldn't mind reading it again sometime in the future. Looking forward to your other

Finally! It took long enough. It was so nerve racking and angsty. But such a relief too. I just wanted to yell how stupid Holly was being with everyone. Of course, she's not perfect, however, she could've acted much smarter. This story's great. Good job

Oh no! Will won't know anything about Holly until probably the end!This story is going to kill me! AHH! Why did you write it like this? Stupid men, they never notice anything until the last second.

I honestly don't like this story, sorry, but Holly's character. Oh God I love her so much. I feel like I'm reading ME. I could see myself doing exactly what she's done, and God I don't even know. I feel like she's so stupid and I feel like I'm stupid and hgdhag.

Okay.

/endrant