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| notyourbiz (that's my usern... 2008-11-17 ch 21,  | haha i was having drama today but when i came home from school i just hopped online and finished reading ur story i forgot all my problems even if it was only 4 a few hours |
| Acantha Alleyoope 2008-11-09 ch 21,  | I really liked the ending to this story. It could do with some revision, some spelling mistakes and that tacky /flashback thing you could probably get rid of, but overall this was a really great romance. holly and william are the next meant-to-be poster children. :) |
| draesmer 2008-11-02 ch 21, | it was great :] ok, a little soppy a at times, but still great :] took me three hrs to finish ^.^ |
| randieskins 2008-10-13 ch 21, | OMGOMGOMGOMG! (: I love it. It's the best story on fictionpress! |
| BeanBagChair11 2008-09-23 ch 21, | I read your whole story in three or four days, and let me say now it was fantastic. there was drama, romance, love, friendship, betrayal, action, drugs/alcohol, girls, guys, lust, needs, wants, desires. |
| ree.4.jasp. 2008-09-17 ch 20, | that is so gorgeous. it gets a bit soppy and loses alot of the extra stuff you had going at the start. at the end it was all focussed on holly n will. it was stil really sweet though. awesome writer.xo |
| ree.4.jasp. 2008-09-17 ch 9, | he is so blind. |
| aussie-crazy-banana 2008-09-11 ch 10, | hey :) i like your story and i know this is my first time reviewing but i just remembered that you described him in chapter one as having black hair and blue eyes. :) just thought id help you out :) xx aussie-crazy-banana |
| complexdays 2008-09-06 ch 21, | I loved this story, and although the ending was a little lacking (but still great, none the less - they got back together, didn't they?) I hope you'll begin to write again soon so that I'll be able to read more of your writing! :) Ironically, I was listening to 'Homeward Bound' by Simon & Garfunkel for the last chapter, and it seemed to be fitting a bit .. I hope you'll be able to get around and edit a bit of the last chapter in the years to come, and I can't wait until I can read the sequel. Kudos to you! :) |
| julieell093 2008-09-06 ch 21, | hey are u gonna write an epiloge or however u spell it? |
| annie_kiddo 2008-08-30 ch 21, | this is the second time i am reading this story and i still love it. it gets better each time i read it. you have no idea how long i've been trying to find this story again...but for some reason, i couldnt!! so i finally did, and im happy. :D i love this story, especially the part where holly sang happy birthday to willie at the gazibo...it was just so emotional, sad, and !! haha. anyways, great story. ^^ its definitely one of my favorites. :D |
| Ngoc1231 2008-08-28 ch 21, | Aw yay! This is what I've been looking for. =D Man, I haven't read a good cute story in a long time. Ok really it hasn't been a long time, but a good written one, yeah a while. I am so happy they got together. =D Love the story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
| darkendlovex3 2008-08-28 ch 21, | awhh this story was so cute and sweet (: i know you said this was your first one, but this was pretty good (: i loved it x] |
| LondonLi 2008-08-28 ch 21, | Congrats on finally finishing this story! I know it's taken you several years but I'm proud of you for finishing it! |
| FSlSlayer 2008-08-28 ch 20, | not a bad finsh! Well its been a pleasure reading this story. Have a good one! |