WHOA! beautiful poem! I am amazed completley, it's so good! Rhyming was excellent and everything! WOW!

Aww...so sad. I know how it feels to have to leave someone; it is very painful. Stay strong ;)
Lovely poem- it really gets the message through and touches the heart.

This poem shows how you feel really well.You're so good at expressing your self. Keep up the good work.

thats beautifully said! i feel the same at times. sucks... wow tho, amazing poem!

Wow. I am in awe. The whole format, the words, the feelings...everything is so excellent. This restores my faith in angst poetry. Wow.

Nice. Deep. I know what that's like, had it happen several times myself. Yet if i'm correct you're only 15... in my opinion that's a little young to be writing about love... but all the same, nice.