   lael1bologna 2009-02-25 . chapter 1Wonderful work! I really enjoyed it! |
 LadyRainStarDragon 2005-11-12 . chapter 1Very nice, the story was well laid out within the rhyme scheme. |
 Mystic Mr. Mirroristic 2004-12-16 . chapter 1That was an awesome poem! |
 Trixi Summers 2004-08-10 . chapter 1This poem is beautiful. It also sounds LotR-inspired and that is always a plus.
Great work! |
 alexiocranium 2004-08-04 . chapter 1Another great tale, me poet. Keep up yer great work! |
 Cloud Burst 2004-08-03 . chapter 1hey its a great poem! does it not corresponds to Aragorn's sword from Lord Of the Rings? |
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