nice i will be watching for updates and i hope you can keep up with how well this is done

Great story! I hope you continue it sometime.

prietty cool.mr can't wait to read more.yup yup.^.^

sounds really cool.yup.yup.^.^

i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon

O.O poor guy. wow, you think the future's really come to that? not a lot of new inventions are coming, but there might be a few more wars with Bush in the house.

XD I still love this story. IT's been forever since I read it, and it's still on the same chapter. You need to write! WRITE!! >D

I cant wait for more. You know I've been pushing you about to write more ever since I read it. XD

Now this is interresting.
I'd like to read more soon...

amazing. i like it =^_^=
gah, there are so many gaps to fill in, I really don't understand what's supposed to happen next, which means...
YOU MUST CONTINUE
Yep, continue...
Or else...

i love your story. very discriptive.
write the next chapter soon.

please update this really soon. I'm so excited to see what's going to happen.

I like your style. (Erm... and the slash. Yes. Slash-fangirl, I tend to be, but shh!)
Please do continue :)

can i kill shean, please?
the story is awesome. i love this one too. you're going to continue it, right? i just gotta know what's gonna happen next!

Although still a little short it's a very good chapter =) I can't wait to read more.

Cool... Scary...
I like the way you write!
Yay!
Next chap!