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Reviews For: The Underground

nakoma
2005-08-07
ch 3,
Great story! I hope you continue it sometime.
Cute Little Mongoose
2005-04-29
ch 3,
prietty cool.mr can't wait to read more.yup yup.^.^
Cute Little Mongoose
2005-04-29
ch 1,
sounds really cool.yup.yup.^.^
City Lights Burn Like Stars
2005-01-17
ch 3,
i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon
Tanali
2005-01-01
ch 3,
O.O poor guy. wow, you think the future's really come to that? not a lot of new inventions are coming, but there might be a few more wars with Bush in the house.
Bunny Luna
2004-12-21
ch 3,
XD I still love this story. IT's been forever since I read it, and it's still on the same chapter. You need to write! WRITE!! >D

I cant wait for more. You know I've been pushing you about to write more ever since I read it. XD

Blonde King
2004-08-24
ch 3,
Now this is interresting.
I'd like to read more soon...
chibi-jinx
2004-05-24
ch 3,
amazing. i like it =^_^=
gah, there are so many gaps to fill in, I really don't understand what's supposed to happen next, which means...
YOU MUST CONTINUE
Yep, continue...
Or else...
LeaveMySanity
2004-05-24
ch 3,
i love your story. very discriptive.
write the next chapter soon.
Painted Desert
2004-05-24
ch 3,
please update this really soon. I'm so excited to see what's going to happen.
Suzette Llacer
2004-05-22
ch 1,
I like your style. (Erm... and the slash. Yes. Slash-fangirl, I tend to be, but shh!)
Please do continue :)
chibi-jinx
2004-04-26
ch 2,
can i kill shean, please?
the story is awesome. i love this one too. you're going to continue it, right? i just gotta know what's gonna happen next!
Hopes Forgotten
2004-04-25
ch 2,
Although still a little short it's a very good chapter =) I can't wait to read more.
Cerissa
2004-04-24
ch 1,
Cool... Scary...
I like the way you write!
Yay!
Next chap!
Hopes Forgotten
2004-04-24
ch 1,
Ohh... it's short but very good so far. I'd like to read more, I'm hoping you'll get a chance to update soon.
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