WOW I loved this style and the way you use the words to the utmost creativity and all you are really good actually your great bye

This is awesome. I like the form you created... I don't suppose I've ever seen a poem formatted quite like that, but I like it. Another excellent piece. Kizzeep it up.

very good is a really good piece you have 't quit for anything!
your irish lover

You know what this poem makes me think of as a reader and an adolescent? Someone who just had a really bad hit of Pot, and wants to blame it on others. But then I can't speak from experience, yet I've heard it so from a buddy of mine.

I like the way this poem is set out - simple, yet effectve. Well placed rhymes and good sentiment, well done!
Thanks for the review,
Blessed Be,
Andaren x