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| bansira 2007-03-23 ch 4,   | Very pretty story. I really like the main character... and evryone else for that matter xD; Hope you continue? |
| Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doo... 2006-12-28 ch 4, | So I'm basically resigned to the fact that you probably won't update this again but... I really wish you would. It's so great! I have it on story alert just in case. ♥'s and X-Rated Thoughts-- Luci-chan |
| City Lights Burn Like Stars 2005-09-25 ch 4, | i like it i love it i want some more of it! ^^ update soon |
| Rakuda 2005-05-27 ch 4, | Lovely story you got. I love your character development and style, so fluid! Can't wait for the next installment. (my oh my, you've got me obsessed already: Esan is to DIE FOR!) |
| Jay 2005-03-06 ch 4, | please write more, I really really like it ^_^ |
| DispatchMD 2004-08-06 ch 4, | This is very good...I like your writing style. Please update! |
| jinny 2004-05-24 ch 4, | sorry for being too lazy to sign in. heehee. anyway, i'm in love with this story, and esan is a really good character. i like the way the plot's playing out. keep it going. |
| imbued 2004-05-23 ch 4, | Very nice. You've got that whole slutty, jaded, near-elitist attitude down. And aw, Faye in one of your stories. Heh. She's still cute in this one, too. But yeah, I have theories about what'll happen next, but I'll keep them to myself until I read it and find out whether I was right or not. :) And the fact that I want to check back on the story says a lot for its quality. |
| Katii 2004-05-23 ch 4, | Saa. Darling. Sweetheart. You know you're my idol, doncha? I don't say it much [or review, 'coz I suck], but I read this story almost every day just because it's so great - don't care if it's been updated or not. And rofl at adding Faye .. s'adorable, and so great. ^^ Now you need to write KW ficcies! *tackles* love you .. most. |
| Olena 2004-05-22 ch 4, | Okay, I have no clue if I'm one of the first three, but what the heck. And uh... the questions I have ARE about the plot, so I'm not sure if I'm just waisting time here. But anyways, are the two girls like, in love? I mean, his sis and his friend? It sounded like it, but I'm just curious. Nehoo, a great chapter, as usual, keep writing! |
| qq 2004-05-22 ch 4, | I loved the chapter. Update soon, please. Thanks. |
| destiny and red thread 2004-05-18 ch 3, | You know how rare it is for me to be so into a fic by the third chapter? It's like-- like-- well, it's rare, so congratulations on that. Disney is evil, we all know that. Watch for the sexual innuendos in "The Little Mermaid" sometime. It's awesome. Update!! |
| chibi-jinx 2004-05-17 ch 3, | good chapter. ha. i haven't been on in so long, but i saw that you updated and had to check it out. well, my only complaint is that I can't wait for the next chappie! And hey, what happened to your other story? Aren't you gonna update that one too? |
| Olena 2004-05-16 ch 3, | Ah, evil you T_T And an even deadlier cliffie! Me wants more, ya hear?! Every chap is like, so cute and smart and smooth, real pleasure to read. Go on, or I shall steal your comp and type it up for you! *gets smacked by some random bishies* ...or not, but continue soon! And I hope you feel better^^ |
| tears that have fallen 2004-05-03 ch 1, | get story i like alot. I'm really interested in this story. its awesome |