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| Nara Dinaer 2004-09-28 ch 1, | Stunning, and somehow mournful. |
| Sage Valkisco 2004-08-15 ch 1, | Depressing...*sigh* |
| Eirien 2004-07-24 ch 1, | Short and powerful. It says all it needs to say, and the rest can be filled in by the reader, such as what the dreams might have been. I think this is a very effective poem, the parallelism and the graphic descriptions add to that. |
| samantha1990 2004-07-13 ch 1, | thats really good keep writing |
| Charisma101 2004-06-16 ch 1, | sounds horrific.. but nicely written! thanks for r/r mine! |
| Nighttime Wanderer 2004-06-01 ch 1, | ALl I can say is, I hope that I never have to give up on my dreams. And I love the way that your poetry makes me think about putting myself in those positions, well...in the positions that I don't already feel on a daily basis. |
| Matthew James Current 2004-05-31 ch 1, | Very hopeless. It has feeling to it, but those feelings seem obscured by the brevity of the poem. I mean, it's a powerful short poem, but maybe I am just used to longer poems. I'm not sure. In any case, you convey your feelings well, and add an inventive spin to the poem with the last line. Keep writing, keep expressing yourself, keep alive. |
| Dreaming Slumber 2004-05-14 ch 1, | Wow... How so very tradgic... and sad. I really really like it! I, mean no... It's just seems full of emotion, even if its sad. Not so delicate, Rose |