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| Ariaenia 2005-02-27 ch 1,   | It is hard to let go, and it's even harder to look away...So heartfelt! Nice work. ~Aria~ |
| Choleric Mist 2004-08-04 ch 1, | I would say to get over her (but who am I to judge, I don't know the situation, so I won't knock), but I won't because it's quite rude when I don't know the situation n stuff. Nice poem, it is pretty good, just some of the rhyming is way to forced, the "dance" bit was very random yet at the end you pulled it off well. Nice work. |
| Prince of Mirkwood 2004-05-05 ch 1, | sad... but nice. =) |
| WakeRobin 2004-04-25 ch 1, | Such a sad poem. I like it. |