true dat yo. (extremely ghetto kiara) the last line is good. umm..it's difficult to critique a single haiku because it is so short, but I think it's pretty good. I like when there's a collection of haikus, so I can really see your style and flow at once, but of course that has nothing to do with the writing. Uh, not much else to say here. good job
~Kiara

Yay!
Smelling is kewl!
*sniffs*
Do I smell...fresh-baked cookies!?!

Great last line! Scents from the past...great haiku.

Good job! The decription is great. I suck at haikus; I dunno, they feel to cramped for me. But this is great. I especially like the contrast between sweet and sharp. yay! ^_^