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| Zero+duero 2004-05-09 ch 1, | hm its a very interesting play. and who said it cant be done? if its some frens than i'm quite sure they can be proven wrong. i'm sure gobolds can be used to dicpict the fly in the soap and an offstage voice for the fly's voice. it'll be a very empty stage with a bowl of soup, a table and u! :D do check out my play thats my chair...its not up yet...but yah soon :D |
| Aimee Raven 2004-04-27 ch 1, | Hey! Lol, I do find this amusing actually...morbid and kinda sad but in this funny mood I'm in undoubtedly quite funny...it's really cool...I'm one to have a conversation with a dead fly...but I liked the fly...it was funny...but all this is very cool...I like the 'nine people die every second' it's sad...but it's nature...I'm sick of people mourning, and I don't see why I should feel sorry for dead people when we all die and as it's inevitable why on earth do we make such a fuss about it? *sigh* i'm going crazy...but nvm. Love, Mia |
| J Pine 2004-04-25 ch 1, | Very different! That was a nice piece of work, definitely different from some of the plays i've seen on this site...good job! keep up the good work! Please R&R one of my stories |
| elvenstorm 2004-04-25 ch 1, | Had to read this just from the title! This is great how did you think of it? I like the converstion between them and how it flows and is so perceptive whilst still being humouress. Lol why would you talk to a dying fly, its cool :) Nice one! |