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| GlueStik 2004-10-27 ch 1, | abuseI will worship you today, yesterday and tomorrow; Even if it only brings me sorrow. Your really good at making one line stand out above all the rest and relating to the reader. Lovin' it lots Jamie |
| teh tarik 2004-09-23 ch 1, | abuse*the silver flash of your laugh* That was a beautiful line. I don't know much about sonnets, but I think they're supposed to have a syllable scheme or something. Oh well, correct me if I'm wrong... |
| blackpowderchick 2004-08-29 ch 1, anon. | abusejust for future reference, it is possible to just dash down your thoughts and still rhyme... check out my poem violent love... i wrote it in three minutes... when i was really mad. ~blackpowderchick |
| behindNosweetSmIlE 2004-05-02 ch 1, | abuseGreatly described emotion! I can relate! ~Salix Nigra~ |
| mars 2004-04-26 ch 2, anon. | abusewow...would not like to be on your bad side right now. whats eating you? its not one of my favourites, partly coz i dont like to think of you being THAT sad and partly bcoz its a bit heavy. on the other hand very emotional. good work. and cheer up. :) -die-hard-fan- |