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| Manju 2005-05-13 ch 1,  | abusewow, ur poems are short! great job though.. |
| Spector'sGirl 2005-04-21 ch 1, | abuseshort and bittersweet - you can really pack a lot of punch into a small area which is very impressive |
| l057 1n51d3 2005-04-18 ch 1, | abusesimple but effective. good concept. t.s. |
| Rebecca Kelsey 2005-01-10 ch 1, | abuseshort but incredible. |
| beve 2004-10-23 ch 1, | abusehey this is nice- short but sweet. its almost...well i wouldnt say cute- that would be very off. but its like u cramped so many diff emotions into a small poem. the words are simple yet somehow..meaningful. this is one of the few poems i actually found pleasant to read. thanks for reviewing a poem i wrote a long time ago-sorry i havent gotten round to reiewing any of urs till now |
| Cymoril Avalon 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuseVery short, very sweet, and it really struck me. "Broken lullaby" sounds almost like it's referring to crying. T-T This poem makes me sad. |
| mizutenchi22 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseAgain, needs something else...another image or analogy. |
| floorcollision 2004-07-11 ch 1, | abusethx for the review-- this is good. :) |
| littleskinny 2004-06-30 ch 1, | abuseyou get lots of reviews...very jealous... This is gorgeous. Very sweet...Skinny |
| CrimsonEnchantress 2004-06-25 ch 1, | abuseit seems kind of like a dream; the fading between reality, awakeness, and the realm of sleep. its almost like a release of all the things evil and painful in our lives...like death almost. this is mysterious, and somehow i cant help but think you could expand on it? |
| Breaking Heart 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abusefor some reason,i like this. try more next time,k? irish lover |
| mastermound 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou have a very alkaline trioish approach I like... your poems are short... but to the point... start taking putting your lines together to form songs or longer poems...what your writing right now is poetry.. but your not writing poems... know what I mean... your good though... I like the way you think... now put some ** effort into it... haha... struggle a bit...in any event... I"ve never seen anyone (besides myself of course) with such an ability to create quoteable lines |
| Sillygoose49 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseAnother cute poem. I like how you keep them short, sometimes poems can be so long, and it gets very tiring to read. Sillygoose |
| Birdaloo 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseyet another shortie. this must be your style. i like this one more than the hate you one. good job. ~Birdy |
| Dream of Hope 594 2004-05-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting I like it keep writing *Princess Foxtails* *~Little~Poet~* |