God, I haven't reviewed this yet? I have this little booklet of poems I've printed out (my favorites) and I'm going through it and discovering I've barely reviewed any of them. Very sorry, shall correct that mistake immediately. I love this piece; the images are excellent and I especially like the ending because it really rings true. Great job, keep writing. Review me if you're free.
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-laurenraven

I really liked that poem. It was very true, and i think a lot of people can relate! *MAKE MORE POEMS* *applaudes*
*BRAVO!*
thanx for reviewing my story! ;-)

I can see that only a little extra atention paid to the formatting would mke this more readable to me. I think and agree with the other reviews that this poem already has great flow and the wordplay is imaginative and expressive of the painful emotions being endured and expressed. It clearly has some beautiful lines. I am one who enjoys shorter poems but still finds this thaught provoking and deep.
Top marks
Nine Iron

O quite profound^^ I'm not usually one for the romance genre, but that sorta changes my mind. I like how the fact that it doesn't have a rhythm gives it one, know what I mean?

*claps hands* Fabulous poem. It's so sad and heartfelt. I love the atmosphere that you create. Your pain seeps so beautifully through each verse. I hope you're feeling better... Bravo.
P.S. Would you consider reading "Here For Another Day"? I'd like to hear from you. Please? :)
P.P.S. I couldn't help but notice that one of your favourite stories involve a hot teacher. I have a semi-fictional story called "Unravel" that you might like. Read the summary if you're curious.