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| confwuzzled 2005-04-28 ch 1,   | kinda sounds like my life only worse. very well written though!!!!confwuzzled!! |
| woozy mizzenmast 2004-12-27 ch 1, | you know what? this sounds like it could do with rapping. something like eminem and dido's "stan"...you know what i mean? wonder how you're dealing with these problems you've got...gd luck! |
| Account 2004-12-21 ch 1, | Heh, I know where you were going with this. Seriously understandable.I've had all those feelings and thoughts running around. Making it so that you can't eat for days, the world is spinning out of control, and you're losing your grip on it.Very nicely portrayed though, with your blunt-yet- poetic style. Nice job. |
| Rachel Faith A. Teknoman 33... 2004-07-19 ch 1, | I hope you're not in that kind of mood much, Jake... I like it, and feel sorry for you for feeling like that on that day. -Rachel |
| Wrathful Diana 2004-05-30 ch 1, | Wow, your life seems to stink more than I think my life does. I lend you my sympathy. Now I am depressed. ~Nymph |
| Breaking Heart 2004-05-27 ch 1, | yeah,so,umm,i don't really feel bad for you.at least you are "out",maybe? that's the feeling that i got from this,anyways. whatever your irish lover |
| vanburen 2004-05-01 ch 1, | From the looks of it, all your problems are coming from girls, so if you avoid girls, no problems. Voila. Ok, I'm kidding, I know it's not that easy. So just hang in there. Go compose a sonata. Keep writing. It's the best medicine. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-04-29 ch 1, | uh if its a poem, use stanzas or smthg... if not perhaps classify as smthg else? on the writing itsef, great! |
| Always Writing 2004-04-28 ch 1, | Aw, I guess life can be pretty ** sometimes. I guess you've got it bad too. Very well written; short sentences are to the point, and add to the angst you write with. Great ending too. You made a very good job. Well done. -Carrie |
| Lilah 2004-04-28 ch 1, | Jake, I really want you to be happy so, if you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here. Just know I care about you a lot. I've always wanted some way to repay you for keeping me going in seventh grade. I really didn't think I would make it through the year. Thanks.. |
| Twizted-Fate-666 2004-04-27 ch 1, | Hey buddy, it's me "**" lmao the one in your story lol, i really liked this, you know we're bestfriends, dont keep your emotions hidden, dude i'm bi !! lmfao we can tell eachother stuff. Lotz of Bloody love, TwIzTeD fAtE |
| Layla737 2004-04-26 ch 1, | aww... :( you just gotta take it day by day... things go a lot faster that way |