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| Cedric Quilfeather 2006-02-19 ch 1,   | Umm. I'm a little scared. I find myself backed up into the corner, whimpering. You did a good job doing, um, whatever it was you were trying to do, I think. *Eyes shift back and forth nervously.* So, ahem, yeah. Interesting. *Backs away.* |
| Jeremy 2004-04-27 ch 1, | Good writing, definitely :) Very amusing, and yet very sad. I love the patterns of the variations of Ctrl Alt Delete :P y0|_|'13 1334! :D |
| Mbwun 2004-04-25 ch 1, | Wow. Excellent piece. Very emotional. My one criticism would be that the profanity sometimes seems gratuitous--and that's coming from the self-proclaimed king of excessive swearing.:) You especially did a good job of getting the voice of the character. ~He Who Walks On All Fours |
| Formerly 2004-04-25 ch 1, | Holy **. This is far and away the best thing I've read on Fictionpress. In fact, it's probably one of the top five things I've read anywhere on the Internet, and from a guy who spends ten+ hours a day reading online, that's saying something. |