I really think you should continue this story.
It's got the stuff to become really good.
Continue It!

I just stumbled upon this story, and I really liked it, and then...there wasn't any more. I know you are probably busy, or have a good reason for not updating (or even if you don't, I hardly ever do) but I really enjoyed the first two chapters and I would like to find out what happens next. Please?

O.o I know a boy called Alex Coles. Trust me, you don't want to write a story about that homophobic moron.

That is very good. I like it! Seeing things so closely through the main character's eyes makes it seem very real, especially because of the fact that he doesn't seem to be able to really process what is going on: "I knew them, saw them die. I wasn't sure I understood it, though." Hope you continue this... And thanks for reviewing MT!

...excited to read it.
I can't believe it cut me off. No idea why, it was short.

I really hope you continue this story. I found it a few days ago, and now I want(NEED, heh) to know what happens. Sometime soon, perhaps? Even if you update a year later, I'll still be really freaking (

Joy! You updated!! (Unlike someone I know... *cough cough*) And of course I like it!!
Speaking of liking-ness, I also like (oh Gods, I just used that word 3 times.. Ack- anyways...) the character Charlene, I thought she was very cool, along with being realisitic, too. (The fact that she was affected by the gruesome circumstances around her, despite the idea that she's supposed to be "strong.")
Although it wasn't quite as depressing as the last chapter, this chap definitely had its share of morbid truths. Like the poor soldier (whoa, almost typed shoulder)who went into shock after he was told he'd be returning to the fighting. O.O I liked it though, along with when Alex was wondering what it would be like to face his family once he was sent home. Gosh, that would be tough... (And let's not forget that Stash has gone blind! *hugs him*)
Now that I've blathered away- most importantly, I can't wait until he meets up with Stash and there's actually some slash! Ah yes, wonderful slash goodness.
This is great, please continue soon!
(P.S. Um...*sheepish* I'm, uh, almost done chapter 11. But holy cow, it's been... a month. I'm so unreliable! >.< Anyways, I really like the story, and I'm so sad for Stash) Ack, it's supper time, gotta go!

I liked the chapter. Thanks for continuing the story. Update soon, please.

NO YOU ENDED IT RIGHT THERE! Well this story is going great. Can't wait for the slash part. I wanna see how he reacts when he sees Stash. Oh this is gonna be cute!

Oh wow! Yikes a'bie! That was great! I liked the ending... I'm supposing that he died, but what can I say, it was great! I hope you write more of these kinds of fiction stories... I really liked them :) take care!

CONTINUE- It simply cannot be left there. It just...can't. (Well, it could, but that would be mean.)
*wink* But that was great. I'm not usually one for stories which don't contain fantasy, but I enjoyed it thoroughly all the same!!
It may have been dark in theme and therefore a little depressing, but what can you expect when writing about the Vietnam war? It was a bloody disaster! *nodds solemnly*
Your facts made it all the more believable, too, along with Alex's thoughts... very nicely done. I praise thee!
As for the slash, well, that's what I'm seeing their friendship as, no questions asked! (Oh yes, and when I saw the "RPG" I knew it simply could not stand for role-playing-game, but it struck me as funny all the same because that's the first thing I thought when reading it. Oh alright, sorry, I am such a dork..)
Gah, and as a last note, I apoligize for not reviewing previously, but I really am such a lazy bum and don't get around to reading much. O.o However, considering I've been slacking off on writing Rotd lately *nervous, shifty eyes* I've finally been able to return the favor at least a tiny bit!
It's an excellent piece, and you must give it another chap! -There, that's all I'll blab on about for now.
^_^
Oh, and P.S.- Stash is such a cool name, however did you come up with it?
*gasp* Ack, and one more thing- What is this "Too Little Fish In The Sea" about?? And The Fallen sounds pretty damn interesting, too! Okay, until next time then! *waves*

NO!! You can't leave it there. Continue with the story. PLEASE! I like this story. Please continue it. Thanks.

Continue... even though this is really depressing, I liked it. Good writing, if an awfully tragic topic.