Give up? Lauren the Great? NO WAY! But if it makes you feel any bit better (which it probably won't) I feel almost the same, except maybe not this bad. But I feel like I'm drowning and my only floats are my friends, so bear with it! I'm here with you always.
~Nikki~

Too bad it is one of your best poems so far. It's beautifully written and amazingly vivid.

Very simple.
I don't know if I like it or not...:S
-beauty