It's a beautiful concept, tragic but beautiful, and your style flows so well. The detail and description is also very flattering and provides great imagery. I read the entire story and it never disappointed. An instant favourite.

A beautiful tale already, I just hope there is to be more! Persephone not only has a curious name, but a curious life. I do wish I could read more, a fantastic story, keep up the good work! ^^

Ahh... I finally got around to reading this. ^^ Poor Persephone... I hope his life gets better soon. ^_^ I have the intense urge to strangle Lucian too... >_>... Abusive little bastard. XD

But yes, I hope Persephone's life turns to the better soon. ^_^ I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Wow, this is a really awesome story. :3 I fell upon it after viewing a fanart of Demetrius on DeviantArt (sorry, I don't recall the artist). Dispite a few typoes here and there, the plot appears to be thickening. I can't wait to read more of it, so I hope you keep writing and update soon.

Love this story, your writing style really makes readers feel whats going on with your characters. Very lovely, keep up the great work!

I really enjoyed how you set up the mood for the chapters with lyrics. Nice job overall =)

Aww that was so sad!! You said this part was finished, right...? I can't wait for the next one! I sure hope everything turns out okay for Persephone, I'm such a sap like that... And that Demetrius guy is a bit goofy... Why doesn't he kill Lucian already?! *growls* evil vampire, kill it...

you confussed me! no more song lirics. ok ^.^

this so totally ROCKS! And it's sexy too.

hey sweetie I'm SO glad to see you are reuploading this! (kicks mean fp people) TAKE THAT YOU MEANIES! THIS IS A GREAT STORY! (centi beams then sniffs) I wanna rp wif you agian. I was having a good time.

argh! why do you do this to poor pers?!!?!? T_T update ^^ pliz

I enjoyed reading this story. It's well written and the lyrics tie in well with the action. I feel sorry for Persephone, and I hope Demetrius can help him.

After reading the list of reasons this story got taken down (you sent 'em to me, remember?), my sister and I speculated that, since none of them actually applied to Persephone, that maybe it got taken down on purpose. Is that how it turned out?
...Well, in any case, I'm glad it's back up here, so I'll be able to keep up with it. I could read it off the site, but chances are I'd never notice it getting updated. So.. yaay!
And another excessively long review. *sigh* It's a good day for those.
Luv,
~Zip