lol... that was cute.. i liked it

wow... i could actually tell who most of these are... amazing. who's the fuchsia one & the young-looking one & the one that's not yours? (u can e-mail me if u want instead of posting it)

i lvoe this collection... how you describe yourself through the clothing,... keep them coming

nice descriptions... i love the last stanza... its awesome

whoa lindsay...im surprised how ppl can make a poem out of n e thing. are u sure this doesnt have n e hidden meanings? lol. eventho i just asked u cause u r sitting right next to me as of now lol. bye!

This is great, it really made me smile. It is light hearted and a pleasure to read. one thing though - you repeat the phrase 'draws attention to itself' which weakens the poem as it makes it seem more amateurish (because it makes it seem like you couldnt find something else to say)
Otherwise, i thought it was fantastic. I will be looking for some more of your writing !

Yoko shares your pain, but she isn't strong enough to throw out those old coats in her closet. Hahaha, very cute!