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Reviews For: Spring Cleaning Time

simpleplan13
2007-02-06
ch 3,
lol... that was cute.. i liked it
monkey
2006-01-21
ch 1,
wow... i could actually tell who most of these are... amazing. who's the fuchsia one & the young-looking one & the one that's not yours? (u can e-mail me if u want instead of posting it)
simpleplan13
2005-04-29
ch 2,
i lvoe this collection... how you describe yourself through the clothing,... keep them coming
simpleplan13
2004-04-27
ch 1,
nice descriptions... i love the last stanza... its awesome
Blondeggman
2004-04-26
ch 1,
whoa lindsay...im surprised how ppl can make a poem out of n e thing. are u sure this doesnt have n e hidden meanings? lol. eventho i just asked u cause u r sitting right next to me as of now lol. bye!
tari-morielen
2004-04-26
ch 1,
This is great, it really made me smile. It is light hearted and a pleasure to read. one thing though - you repeat the phrase 'draws attention to itself' which weakens the poem as it makes it seem more amateurish (because it makes it seem like you couldnt find something else to say)
Otherwise, i thought it was fantastic. I will be looking for some more of your writing !
Yoko Endovale
2004-04-26
ch 1,
Yoko shares your pain, but she isn't strong enough to throw out those old coats in her closet. Hahaha, very cute!
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