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| spiderfly 2008-07-17 ch 1,   | I know exactly where you are coming from! I enjoyed this poem - well chosen topic, too - but as a piece of literature, I thought it was quite infantile. Highly entertaining, and the sudden switch at the end was interesting, but if I was to think of it as a poem I needed to analyse, I don't think there would be much to say. However, I think it is only meant to be a joke, so yeah, thanks. |
| Satanic Thoughts 2006-06-14 ch 1, | Loved it! |
| cheeriochumchum 2006-04-20 ch 1, | stupid boys... ... I love boys. Amen! |
| Link2Past 2005-11-09 ch 1, | LMFAHO! YOU ARE HILARIOUS! Ok, seriously, maybe i'm taking this the wrong way, but i thought that was hilarious. |
| SarahKatie 2005-06-10 ch 1, | I love boys too! Just not the IB ones. (No offence DD.(and anyway you have too many girls that do love you)) Anywho...this is Sada im writing to. Loved it. Am I annoying yet? |
| Lulu--->you kno who i am 2005-03-08 ch 1, | Hey Sarah...i loved this poem b/c i alos LOVE BOYS!! wow!! We got a lot in common, huh? Maybe it's b/c we've like known each other for 12 freakin years...yup...12 long long...and miserable years...haha...u kno i love you!! much love...we gotta chill sometime ok? *mUaH* |
| servatis-a-pereculum 2004-11-03 ch 1, | AHEM! Yes i did write some of it! Me and Jessica wrote every other line! And YES i did write the last line "I love boys." Grawr. |
| Katie B. 2004-11-02 ch 1, | Ahem. Sada did you really write that? It sounds like you just added the last line and Jessica did the rest! JK! HAHAAHHAHAHA THat's funny |
| Emma 2004-11-02 ch 1, | sada just remember, NO TOUCHING! wow thats gonna sound interesting to ne1 who doesn't no about that i like ur poem its funny (thats sounds like a 2 yr. old doesnt it-u can tell im IB) |
| An-Author-At-Heart 2004-10-22 ch 1, | Hehehe... this one's cute too. I also know what you mean in this one. Boys can be so dumb, so immature and only thing about "you know what", but I love 'em anyway. Not really those guys, but the guys who are a LITTLE like that but are super nice. Actually, sometimes I do like those guys but just because I like looking at them ;). Goodness, do I talk about me too much? *slaps herself on the head lightly* Anyway, your stuff is so fun and great! Keep it up! |
| Big C@ME 2004-08-13 ch 1, | This was funny! The phrase, 'men can't live with them, can't live without them' comes to mind. |
| Bigfoot111 2004-04-27 ch 1, | that's cool... funny... i like it :) |
| distantdistorteddisturbed 2004-04-26 ch 1, | Lol humerious and too the point. Nicely done. |