Wow. This really makes me think about graduating, even though I am just a sophomore. Lately I've been realizing it's closer than it seems. This was a wonderful piece, and I absolutely loved the whole dance metaphor. Great job.

I like this one too. I'm not a senior this year, but I know people who are; very well-written.

Wow.
I like it! I can relate, too. I'm graduating next year. Your structure is well thought-out (A-B-A-B, by the look of it), and none of it feels forced. I thnk I'll take a look at the rest of your work.