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| modells 2005-03-08 ch 3,  | abusewhat?! that is harsh! omg! no!! ... is it the mother? ... no it can't be the mother.. who is it? |
| modells 2005-03-08 ch 2, | abuseahh foreshadowing... crap... what does it MEAN!?!? :-) |
| modells 2005-03-08 ch 1, | abusereally good. the switch from her thoughts (singing in the shower) to her mom yelling at her to stop got a little confusing, as it just said, "she..." and no mention of "mom..." but other than that, it's really good. i like. :-) |
| hiddenraindrops-kitsune 2005-03-06 ch 2, | abusereally good... |
| hiddenraindrops-kitsune 2005-03-06 ch 1, | abusewow, pretty good. totally awesome and thanks for the review on mine. though, i meant it to be pretty short... |
| chocomunke 2004-10-13 ch 2, | abuseOh this is so good. I cant wait to find out where she is going. Update please. |