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| Cloud Burst 2005-04-20 ch 1,   | wow, this was beautiful! im not sure who u mean by mynah though.. a person?great job! |
| Impressionist 2004-06-10 ch 1, | beautiful |
| Matthew James Current 2004-04-26 ch 1, | O_o Cool. The imagery is very cool and at a couple instances seems almost.. sexual. In any case I really enjoyed reading this poem. The flow seems a bit disrupted at times due to how you broke up the poem. Good use of vocabulary, too. Well done! |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2004-04-26 ch 1, | nice, original |
| Amethyst Horizon 2004-04-26 ch 1, | gorgeous! wonderful imagery! i really love it! |