 FuZz ZuRiFf 2005-02-28 . chapter 1i rEmEmBeE dA daI u r0tE DiS uP. i wAs wAtchIn u oUt oF mAi wInd0w. u wrote dIs bUt DeN u g0t stuck. i waNTed t0 hElP y0u n l0vE y0u. BUt mAI gUrlFrIeNd wOUld hAvE g0tTeN mAd dAt i hAdN't t0lD hEr i wAS wAtcHiN j00.
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we cOuLd hAve hoUrs oF fuN doIn thIngs. |
 Kaylee Sabrina Green 2005-01-03 . chapter 1Thanks for the A/N 'cause I was going to go look it up in the dictonary lol. anywho. I love this song honestly it's one of your best if not the best but I can't say best yet because I haven't read them all. Love always ~Kaylee~ |
 Chris Taylor 2004-12-19 . chapter 1Just want to ** with your headAnd give your sanity death.
best lines in the whole thing. this has a kinda darkness that i can relate to (and if you dont believe me by the name, just read some of my songs, you'll see). as far as you leaving fic press, the choice is realy yours. it would be a shame to see a talented author leave a place that has been slightly corrupted, but i shall do nothing to try and stop you. thanks for reviewin my essay, and i always thought it was a WRITTEN rule, *shrugs* i guess that's just wishful thinking (and when you think about it, i havent even been here two months yet, technically i'm new too). keep up the good work.
Peace and Chicken Grease |
 ByFireAndMoonlight 2004-12-15 . chapter 1heh heh, this is very nice. Kinda . . . morbid I guess, very nice. Keep up the good writing. ^_^ |
 Crimson Riley 2004-07-16 . chapter 1I read this... it in itself is completely insane! Like psycho stalker exboyfriend insane... I liked it and was afraid of it all at the same time. So that basically means I loved it lots LOL
Excellently Done
CrimsonRiley |
 hateselfhate 2004-07-08 . chapter 1haha I like your pyschotic songs. Nicely down! *Bows down to you as well* |
 Sang Yu Nung 2004-06-18 . chapter 1That was a crazy-insanely dark poem! It seems that you chose to take the position of someone who... obviously thinks very differently then others. ^^ Since it's summer & I'm almost too lazy to think... I have to look up some words, lol but this was nicely written. I like the bridge- that was definitely original! Write on, read more later, ~Sang Yu Nung |
 It's Closing Time 2004-06-14 . chapter 1Wow this is so creepy, I love it ^_^. And yeah it's so weird that my name and your title are close o_o.. I also have a story called My Insnitys Requiem too. I love this song so far! Are you in a band? Because if you are and you guys have sung this I wanna hear! *Thumbs up* |
 Tommy2007 2004-05-17 . chapter 1You really have talent... I mean, I have never seen lyrics of your with mistakes - and this one maintains your high standards! |
 Steel Winged Angel 2004-05-14 . chapter 1*mouth drops* Holy **! This sends shivers down my spine, but it's really really awesome. Full of wow! |
 fontanellemonster 2004-05-13 . chapter 1Lol...loved it..it made me want to write something again. |
 x Broken x Skin x 2004-05-10 . chapter 1 Ooh this is really dark and good. I like this one! I could never write this many songs, you're good at it! |
 Shinji Boi69 2004-04-30 . chapter 1Wow! I wish I could hear this one. I like it alot. Did you writ the music to it. I would sound so cool. I loved the way it ended. Great work. Keep writing songs. You're so lucky you're good at them. I'm a poet but I can pretend to write songs can't I? Oh. well. It's just not ment to be for me. Keep up the great work. |
 Eagle Seance 2004-04-29 . chapter 1Wo... crazy but really good! Go sell it to a band! I love the title BTW {V. sorry if this came up twice} |
 biblehermione 2004-04-29 . chapter 1Oy! Scary-ish. It would make a nice metal song. |