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| lalamushu 2004-04-27 ch 1,   | this is a very interesting story. i hope you continue w/ it. ^_^ could you put a little more physical description to the characters? when i envision them in my head, it's like the whole entire body is a blur. but that's just one of my little thoughts. up to you, really. great job, and keep writing. |