the first line completely made the poem. very very well done:)

Just curious, whose the "you" in the poem? Is it death? Pretty interesting piece, it's pretty cool that you added stuff like old sayings or what not. Nifty! However, it seemed a bit like a winding road. *ponders* well, hard to give advice/suggestions when I'm not exactly a poet. I love reading your poems thou

Good poem again! I love your work!

well, doesn't everyone? great poem^^ death is so very interesting~

wow i like it, y fear death. great job

True, I liked this, intelligent aprroach to death. It really is, inevitable