sad...although im sure you meant it that way...thanks for adding me to ur fav authors list...

Again, so much emotion! I also liked the rhythm of the poem; it kept me wanting to read on. Keep writing- you're fantastic!

Why is this my first time reading this? n e way, is great, like everything else u do... but yeah. I want more. Please keep writing to keep my boring life interesting. ttyl
~victor~

ur on my fav's!

Such bitterness in the character, a very well built poem with crazy good play of words. Hats off to you for this one.
My criticism:
Where horrid beasts and creatures *flourish* untold