Hey,

I love this poem! The lines are rather urgent, and it gives you a somewhat creepy feeling. The short lines are great! Nice! (:

fascinating, very cool

Amazing. I love this one! 'Specially the last line!

Wow, there's a really nice sense of urgency about this poem. The imagery was execellent and liked the ending. Awesome poem!

Great description. I love the building of the dispair. Just reading it almost made me shiver. I could picture the sinister mother, and the helpless child. amazing!

wow...was a bit eerie...but well written. luv the ending

::breathless:: wow... I like this poem... it was very beautiful, great imagery... and the ending was such a great ending... it was almost like a short story... and you were building it up, and then the climax... the conclusion was great! I liked the part of ppl thinking there was no saviour, and you ended it all really well, saying that mother and child are one.
Well done!

Wow. That's really good. That was in fact amazing! Keep writing.
To tell you quickly, Gigi is the one who got married, it'll be about her. Jane is the romantic, dark skinned one and Aggie is the slutty-ish blond. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing. Trins x

its odd that u remember such indepth detail about a dream, vry vivid, gd writing.
Thanx for the review
XxNerfxX

This is deep. I like it a lot, the poem itself flows and the ending wasn't what I suspected and I love that!
keep writing-
till-iburnout
P.S. Thank you for the review on Spotlight. I'm also adding this to my fav's!

elequent
thank you for writing... and the compliment... i'm glad you liked it... I enjoyed this piece much more after reading the comment of "no more depressing stuff"... grotesque and lovely! a cadaverous illusion!lol anyway... keep it up... but don't dream too often... or it won't end (i speak from experience... eh)-fin
rook hrafnas

nice poem, shocking ending, i like the smoothness of your poem.

Hi this is Darkness and I love your poem. It has so much meaning. I wish could get down dreams as you do. I just have weird dreams like last night there was a vampire in it...anyways wow I am just stunned.

Wow. That is really deep...inspiriational...haunting. Amazing work. (That would be a creepy dream.)
-God bless-

definatly sounds like adream to me. If I hade the money I'd make this a movie. i don't know why. It's just that good and has a very deep meaning. I'm glad you didn't take my review the wrong way. I understand how you feel. Keep up the great work. I really think you're creative. bye for now. :}