|Reviews for In the Dark|
| marmon 1/1/05 . chapter 1
B-man, Interesting, I like it. The way you built suspense and curiosity was great. Then your end leaves us in the suspense you created. Good work. I might suggest shortening the journey through the halls and adding details to the rooms. You know, less words can help build suspense.
| Maykuu 10/18/04 . chapter 1
Hmm.. I was compelled by the summery to read it. Not what I was expecting, but nice immigry...
| slave to the voices 4/28/04 . chapter 1
It's a good story, but I got a little lost with all the doors and stairs. I think with a little reworking you could make it a great story! Anyway, keep writing.
| Dream and Write 4/28/04 . chapter 1
Well done. Keep up the good storylines. I love the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
| Aria-639 4/27/04 . chapter 1
spooky! Dude thats cool, keep it up
(p.s. Er...Can you kinda check out my stories too? Alot of people don't like giving reviews or something _
| IrishVampire13 4/27/04 . chapter 1
Not bad at all; that's a nice little chiller at the end. Good job. :)