Ah, Carrie!
I don't know, I don't have anything to say about this one, only that I like it, that it's nice and that it's saddening...
~Rachel
(Yes... the BlueQueen3 fish Rachel who likes The Angel Amongst Sinners so much and wonders why Amy didn't like it enough to let you go to the next round of that competition for it.)
Later.

very well written, i must say! i wasnt quite so into it at first, but then it really started to speak to me. and i love the ending, esp. the last few lines ^_^ nice work!

OMG! that's so sad. I want to be as good a person as you.
This was very expressive and the way it flowed was great. The end of your poem is so true. This happened to me once. I don't think i'll ever forget but i think I've moved on. Props on showing real emotion.I really liked this one!

-sniffles- Wow Carrie...that is incredibly SAD! you need to stay away from sadness...its...
saddening...lol keep writing!
Dani

This leaves me feeling quiet inside. It's beautiful. At first, I didn't quite know what had happened, if it was just a "break up," so to speak, or what, but at the end...the last few lines really stick. This is wonderfully written, and I'm sorry this happened.