not as disturbing as i would have liked, but its nice. poor teen there. lolz

Well done. Keep up the good storylines. I love the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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Hey coolyay-
Thanks for the reviews, and to be honest, it looks pretty interesting, though not formatted right, which you already said.

Great story. Nice psychotic for your character. Not as disturbing as Francis Dolarhyde from "Red Dragon", Buffalo Bill from "Silence of the Lambs", Leatherface from "The Texas Chainsaw Massacre", or last, but most really, Dr. Hannibal Lecter from "Red Dragon" "Silence of the Lambs" and "Hannibal", but still disturbingly psychotic. Nice story.

it never looks the same when you uplode from word. try saving as a web page and making your corrections in the web page file and then upload the web page. that's what i try to do.

AH! It didn't look like that in Microsoft Word! Example: "His
name was Rube."