your poem has done what "fairytale" has done. it smushed it all togather, if you feel like it, you can fix it by putting 3 spaces between lines before you upload. if you ment for it to be that way, ignore me.
i like the last two lines alot. very good.

i like this one lots.. its deep and like really interesting

wow.. heaven isn't so unlike hell is it? this was really good and the word choice was excellent!

it got all messed up.. but i think you can seperate wher each line is