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| Rupert Greenwich 2005-11-17 ch 9,   | Joe, I have to ask, what the hell happened to this thing? Continue it, dammit! Is it writer's block, 'cause I can fix writer's block. You wait and see. |
| hyperhobbit1802 2004-05-31 ch 9, | Though i was a little freaked out by the sexual content(which by the way my mom almost read) its a really good story keep writing |
| Amazin'_Crazin' 2004-05-09 ch 9, | Wow. this is incredible! The plotline is so different and new, I'm so into it now! Keep up the good work! |
| Hirishu_Mara 2004-05-09 ch 9, | Wow, definently one of the best pieces I have read in a long time. I love the plot, and you seem a very imaginative and innovative writer. A little more detail would help, but the story is still incredible. Please do continue! |
| Destroying Angel 2004-05-05 ch 9, | Overall an interesting story, the neg imagery is well done, same with the action scenes, the chapters are just so...damned... SHORT. Cheers, D.A. |
| Destroying Angel 2004-05-05 ch 3, | Normally I would be looking for flaws and nitpicking my way through this, but I hope you dont mind if I just read for fun for once. Interesting chapter, once again, short as hell and way too many ideas expressed in such a small space. |
| Destroying Angel 2004-05-05 ch 2, | Three words: what the crap? Interesting concepts expressed in this one. |
| Destroying Angel 2004-05-05 ch 1, | Interesting start, short as hell though. (look, I made a funny! haha!) |
| OldJoe 2004-05-03 ch 9, | I would like to apoligize for my somewhat broken japanese in chapter seven, and thank Sorimachi Atsushi for helping me out with it and pointing out what was wrong. Go check 'em out, there is a great story to be read there! Thanks for the reviews everyone! |
| Kevin Noonan 2004-05-03 ch 9, | cool. |
| DansMandy 2004-05-03 ch 9, | YO, JOE! This story is really good! So good, I printed it out. My friends begged for it, and loved it. Just to let you know. Plus, I honor the fact that you try to get these chapters out so quickly. My mailbox has been full with Auther Alerts. Please update soon! ~DansMandy |
| biminator 2004-05-03 ch 9, | good stuff. update soon. |
| biminator 2004-05-02 ch 8, | again, good. but geez, must you push the sexual content? good god, man. |
| hobo_schmo 2004-05-02 ch 5, | Wow, chapter 7 was amzaing, especially w/ all that real japanese stuff. spelling and grammer mistakes are few, lucklily, and never detract from the story. Chapter eight was awesome(Gerard is one lucky guy!) |
| Kevin Noonan 2004-05-02 ch 8, | uh-oh, somebody getting a little inappropriate? |