Reviews for The Dividing Line

Becca Lovechild 2004-05-15 ch 1,	wow. WOW! this was amazing! it's so well-written, and I really did cry when i read it. it reminds me of when my grandpa was in the hospital with cancer, and i was in 5th grade when he died too. this is so touching, i love it!
Nimeneth 2004-04-28 ch 1,	Cries It's so sad. I know how it feels to lose a grandparent. It's hard. Anyway, lovely way to get your feelings out, even if it was sad! sniffle
Kiaden 2004-04-27 ch 1,	It's a really good story, reminds me of when my grandpa was in the hospital... heh...
Gabriel 2004-04-27 ch 1,	WOW! just WOW! it was really good and it was very touchign and sad... now i remember when my great grandpa died.
Al Garfield Zelda Freak 2004-04-27 ch 1,	you really wrote that? It's excellent! I could never write anything remotely that good [partially because I don't have a life ;-)] But seriously, good job.
Nolan Anthoney Quick 2004-04-27 ch 1,	Meli this was truely something emoionall im sorry about everything that has felt so bad and wrong with yourself i think you did become stronger in the end that was very brave meli good for you i love you.