is there going to be more? haven't heard the song, but i like it. And u write well. I wonder what her 'person's' like. Keep going!

aww..that was such a good short story..i'm craing for more! you write really good fics!
^^ Happy!

'Bout time you posted! I know I've been already but I just realized how funny it all is, how ironic. You--songfics! You're always bursting into song, now you torture me on the web as well.
~'My

I like your story. I think it's a great idea for a plot and the song is effective, but I tihnk you've used it too many times. The bit at the end was especially effective but slightly dilute because of the repeated use earlier. that's the only suggestion I could make. I feel realy bad for her, it must have abeen awful to see them together!! pls pls pls update!!
Pls check out my work, I'd love to know what you tihnk :D
HeavenLeigh xx

great story. i cant wait to see what happens. update soon and please read my stories.

You know how I feel about romance but this reminds me of this movie I saw the other day, it seems I'm always watching something, with the whole sister thing. Aww, love in a shelter with an addict, meant to last.
Is this the one you were challenged to do, the one you wanted that poem for? If so, I see the angle.
I'd say more but I'm buzzing again.
~'My

This was a GREAT chapter. I'm not sure if you're continuing it or not, keep up the good work!
And you were right- that definately wasn't one of the same-ol' "I fell in love with my best friend" situations. - K.N.

Very nice and sad. I like this.