Reviews for Savage Champions: Amphibious

Reviews For: Savage Champions: Amphibious

astral boy 2004-05-04 ch 1,	I felt as though I should at least tell you I intend to read this story. I have finished chapter one... I'm gonna read the rest as soon as I can. From what I've read so far... I love it. It is... everything. If you can understand that useless comment, I congradulate you. heh... So yes, I'll read all three of your wonderful stories as soon as I can, and I'd also like to say BAJEEBERS at the size of the review beneathe this one. You have a very loyal fan there. :) Well done. I'll review again once I finish. :S
Ravens Cross 2004-04-28 ch 11,	This piece was amazing. As you know, I was worried in the beginning because I wasn't sure if I would be able to follow or not. As I quickly learned, this would not be as hard to follow as I had assumed. The reasons I found that it might be hard to follow is because of my problem with focus, that of which you already know about. It is hard for me to concentrate on one thing for a long period of time but this work was easy to "keep reading". Once I started it was so hard for me to stop. I read Chapters 1-3 last night and continued with Chapters 4-11 tonight. I found that it did throw me just a bit because of the different races and different worlds, it was something I had to accquaint myself with. Fantasy is so hard for me to comprehend because you have to put so much thought into it to understand it. I will say that you helped me out alot in this piece because of your creative use of description and imagry. You brought everything to life with your words. Everything was so creative and vivid. Also, your use of words were brilliant. I admit that in some areas, I had to find a dictionary to help me with the definitions of some words. The story flowed and it had alot of hidden meaning to me (whether you meant for it to or not. I will take this opportunity to tell you the things I liked most about this piece. In chapter 7 you used the line, "twisted like the face of agony", which I thought was incredible. Also, in Chapter 7, you used the words, "poetic battlefield" to describe the overall scene of the battlefield. I couldn't of thought of more beautiful words to describe something so dark. Which is a bit of irony, so to speak. In Chapter 10 you used a bit of humor (i think) when you said, "talking with your fist instead of your mouth". I couldn't help but chuckle a bit. But I would have to say that my favorite part was the death of Necarrus in Chapter 10. The way you protrayed him to die was unbelieveable. His heart was black and the light from Seiverre caused his end. The best part was when you wrote that Necarrus tried to pull his heart from his own chest to keep it from killing him. I took it to mean that he could live without a heart, but he could not live without the darkness that lived within it. Amazing. Also, in Chapter 11, the queen granted the 4 defenders any one thing that they wished. It seemed to me that what they asked for was such a small price for all that they had done for the world. This made the story all worthwhile, knowing that what they had done for those people meant far less to them than what most would say. I thought this was brilliant, although you are a brilliant person. I find in you things that are only dreamt about and I wish you all the best of luck in your future. Thank you for this opportunity and allowing me to open up and take in something that is fresh and new. Bravo to a job WELL DONE! Always, ~Ravens Cross
Red Star Rising 2004-04-28 ch 1,	whoa dude, slow down! you should upload one chapter at a time... just a suggestion. you clogged up my mail. :) i haven't read this yet, i will when i come back from vacation!

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