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| loser 2004-05-08 ch 1,  | Great! I wish I could rhyme. Keep up the good work. I always told you you were a great writer. *Jealous* :-P |
| CatGirl-Luna 2004-04-29 ch 1,  | I really liked this one. I love the short lines, it makes it flow very nicely. BTW thank you for your review. I'm glad that you liked it. ^_^ |
| Seaspray 2004-04-28 ch 1, | Scary. But very good. The short lines were kind've violent seeming and mock- childish. Very powerful. |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-04-27 ch 1, | I love it.. Very unique and amusing. It's like a child's grown up, only to want to keep playing, only to find a different twist to the game. Well done. |