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| e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-03-10 ch 1, | I want some chocolate now...this is very very tantalizing. It makes me want some so bad! Go give this to the company. I think they would laugh. You have all of our mouths watering. ^^ |
| PyroHiroshi 2004-06-03 ch 1, | My mouth is so watering right now... how could you... :) Like it a lot... Very cute... |
| Katterree Fengari 2004-05-01 ch 1, | very nice...you make them seem almost magical...ah yes, magical sweets, yep twice in the last stanza- "ones" should be "one's" wish I knew what Lindor Truffles were |
| AnnaSun 2004-04-28 ch 1, | Hi, Wow I like this and I like chocolate. Please read and review my poetry. Thanks for sharing :) |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-04-27 ch 1, | M...Why are you doing this to me?? I now have a immensely, powerful and distracting craving for chocolate..and not just any chocolate, but a Lindor Truffle! Great Poem. Well done. |