Love this poem! The only thing i can say is that it would be really cool if it had rhymed but it is still perfect the way it is.

*waterfall tears* that poem describes all of us so much! what a wonderful and well composed poem! this is definitely going on my fav. story list for sure!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

**crys** You are so totally right! The world I want to be in is the world inbetween life and death. Anime! Anyways, great poem! I got your review and everything, and if you want to read the story that I wrote called, "The Dark Element", go to w.animespiral.com, then look up anime12, then last, go to my story, the Drak Element. I have 7 chapters already. Chapter 8 will be up tomorrow. Once again, great poem! Well, see ya later, peep *.*

I DO!! I relate to this poem completely, I have so many dreams and aspirations, I just can't stand unambitious people, we need our dreams to keep us going.

I really understand this poem! but that's ALL I'm going to say... great work...

very true and powerful. you make it clear that poetry doesn't have to rhyme to be good :) so don't beat yourself up about it. I even have a poem that doesn't rhyme called I Am, you might like that one. Well, great job. Keep writing!

First off, thankyou for all the kind reviews, glad you liked 'em. Secondly, awsome poem. It rings so true, every single line. I have wished for that better world a lot too. A finally,you sound like a cool person too. I can't wait till tomorrow night's showing of Wolf's Rain (really like Kiba:)Thanks again!

It was great!! Why are your poems so depressing?! I love them! Yeah, I dream too (dream of meeting Heero! - heh, kidding, kidding). What I meant was that I think people will be able to relate to this poem very well. Again, your images are good and they flow very well. Really liked this one (but the one with the heartbeat thing was my favorite ^.^). Write some stories, Eriko. And draw me!
>.< Heero (hehe) + sherry

love ur poem vry true and close to my feelings superb i say

I can't really say much about it, I just like.

I like the line with "The more I see..." that's my favorite! I also like how you kept the tone questioning- excellent!