Good job, love the story. But it starts off a little strange. Why is her father beating her? What had she done wrong? I'd love it if you can update this story soon, it's amazing, but the suspense is killing me!

Write more! Her dad's mean. Well, duh. Now R&R my story! :P

Wow. this is one of the best things I've seen you write. I'm majorly impressed girl and I know where you live and where you sleep and how to blackmail you so you better be writing more young lady! ...I love you? Yeah, I know. But that was a compliment. This looks like it's gonna be a great story. And you spelled "cheap" wrong. Sorry. Had to.

it was very good. almost like a modern day cinderella version i guess you could say. i dont know if thats what you were going for but still. lol i loved it. try to update soon and please read my stories.