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dooley creel 2005-12-10 ch 1,	abuseActually the four spans are side by side with a small space of ten feet or so between them, they are supported at least on the south side by twelve cylindical concrete columns, there is a sloping concrete embankment which rises to the underside of the roadway. I could have described the passage under the four spans on a foul urban day in a precise essay form, but it is a poem, though I do not try to be obscure for the effect of being, 'poetic' either. I changed the setting on my review thing.
XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2005-03-22 ch 4,	abuseLovely chapter! I enjoyed this very much. The plot is moving along nicely..giggles poor ittle ken doll. Go Lydia!! Lovely update. muah love ya tonz! ~Nikki~
K.E.Hashomer 2004-12-02 ch 4,	abuseThis story's great! Looking forward to more work!
Zoey7 2004-11-23 ch 4, anon.	abusehe he he! this chapter was awesome! well...let's check the score. Lydia - 1, Ken - 0. sweet! but Ken sounds like half the guys at my school - nerdy, into Star Wars...it's all the same. and i likd Em's wedding favors. i think i might use that idea in real life someday! ^_^ i enjoy the rivalry between Ken and Lyds. it's througholy amusing! update soon! =)
Zoey7 2004-11-14 ch 3,	abusehe he he...Lydia's ranting was hilarious. i was rotfl! omg, i can't wait to see what becomes of them being paired up. a match made in heaven, right? Ken-doll...that's such a funny nickname. well, needless to say, it will be interesting to see how the sparks fly between Ken-doll and Barbie (aka - Lydia). love it so far! can't wait for more! ^_^
Zoey7 2004-11-14 ch 2,	abusethis was also a great chapter. i feel really bad for Lydia! the mini flashback was kind of confusing bcuz i didn't know it was a flashback. other than that, i loved it. ^_^ its so sad how they were gonna have a double wedding. i hope the future holds happier times for Lydia!
Zoey7 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseomg, this was really good so far. and thank you for all your kind reviews! anyway, back to the story. Michael is such a jerk! if i saw him again i would slap him three times till Tuesday! and the American Idol line was priceless. mean, but funny! i feel bad for Lydia. i've felt that way too. scary, no? well i love this so far!
XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2004-11-10 ch 3, anon.	abuseAw! This story is so cute so far! I just read all three chapters and I really like where this is going. I like how you gave the clock a sort of life in the first chapter, very fun and unique. Hmm. . Ken and Lydia, huh? raises eyebrows This will be interesting indeed! Anyway, great job! Keep up the great work! hugz ~Nikki~ P.s. Thank you so much for the review on the Assassin of Kevari! I really, really appreciate it!
glitterjewele 2004-09-30 ch 3,	abusei think it's about high time you got rewarded for being such a devout and awesome reviewer, don't you? ;) lucky for me, this was FAR from being a chore to read. it's very, very well-written! the opening chapter drew me in from the start ~ i absolutely loved the way you blended in the cuckoo-clock chimes with her thoughts. a lot of people try doing that, but hardly anyone manages it successfully. also, your characters are fantastic so far! em is very interesting ~ sort of a unique blend of contradictory but terribly cool personality bits: brusque but sensitive, blunt but soft-spoken, precise but caring. i don't think i shall ever get bored reading about her. and lydia is likewise a great character; she's so believable, with the messy apartment (lol loved the ben-and-jerry tv shrine, by the way :P) and after-break-up-sulking and everything. i'm not sure whether or not you want constructive criticism, so i shall hold out until you tell me otherwise; i shall only say: I WANT TO MEET KEN SO'O'O'O'O'O'O'O'O'O'O'O'O MUCH! AH! please introduce him in the next chapter! please? puppy eyes lol alrighty then, chica, well-done thus far, and i sincerely hope you don't let this story die! at least write one more chapter, so we can meet ken, hm? le wink hehe. okie dokes, ttyl!
Spooky152 2004-06-10 ch 3,	abuseI loved the beginning of your story. Absolutely loved it. ::cyber hamsters to you :: I like the relationship between Em and Lydia; it sounds like every little girl's dream to be married with her best friend. I knew it was all the rage on my playground;) Kepp up the good work; it's intruiging!
That'sNotMe 2004-06-07 ch 3,	abuseme again. I repeat: I love Em. She's awesome. I can't really put my finger on what it is about her. Just everything comes together to make her very cool. And again, Lydia's outburst was very human, and reminded me of many people. You're doing an excellent job with this story. I can't wait for more!
That'sNotMe 2004-06-07 ch 2,	abuseI like Em a lot. She seems awesome. And I like that some of Lydia's actions/thoughts/attitudes made me bristle a little bit. She reminds me of a friend of mine, most likely just because you made her human, not perfect. Kudos for that. I really liked this chapter.
That'sNotMe 2004-06-07 ch 1,	abusethis is really good. I like the way you incorporated her worries into the clock chiming. You have a way with words. It's awesome!
W3DNESDAY 2004-06-06 ch 1,	abusehey! col name hehehe, "Mr. Bowtie Bear"... ah...i love this kinda romance..the kind that tugs at your heartstrings (why do i sound like a 70-yr-old man in a kilt?) NO FLAMES FOR YOU YOUNG LADY!(i'm too nice to write 'em anyway) gawd..gotta love the angst and the closure.. o, and if you're really into Greek mythology, come over and read my story and see if you can pick out what all the allusions mean
Dear-Ophelia 2004-05-17 ch 3,	abuseI like this, honestly. I don't usually review those that bore me, but this doesn't. Keep it coming... Thank you for the compliment on my writing. And about that book you were talking about -- No, I have not read it. It sounds interesting though and there seems to be a couple similarities. If you remember the name or author lemme know. Yes, I am an English and Psychology major. I just have always liked history. I incorporate a bit to varying degrees in some of my writing.

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