wow, this is amazing. I wouldn't know what i'd do if i were in that situation. Your writing is extremely powerful. Keep writing and update soon.
~Meg

Very well written, it explains what exactly happens to those who care about the person who loses their life whether it be accidental or intentional. Very well written and very emotional, and i could relate. I am interested in what happens in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing my story.
Lady R

Ohmygod, this is so sad, and so real. You have a wonderful style of writing, carry on with the excellent work.

Awesome...gets better with every chapter...but I'm curious, what is the narrator's name?
Thanks for reviewing Ocean Side!
Alyssa Jo~*

I love it...it's awesome! I hope you update soon, I really wish to find out the course of this story...it's to magnificent ot just stop there.
Could you check out 'Burning Clouds' or 'Ocean Side' for me? They are a couple of my works.
Alyssa Jo~*

wow very powerful. that poor school and that poor girl. what a shock. update soon. i really wanna know what was so wrong with her life that she resorted to that. update soon and please read my stories.

oh that was good...very sad. this was really well written, and the descriptions were wonderful