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| spicymulatta 2004-05-17 ch 1,   | That's really nicely done. The rhyming works, unlike lots of other poems people write where it seems forced. Good job. Hey, I know this is annoying, but if you wouldn't mind, check some of my work out and review it. I would appreciate it. Just if you want to, though. Don't feel like you have to. |
| Lina Inverse 2004-05-15 ch 1, | You have some good imagery, but the rhyme sounds very forced. |
| Sweet Calamity 2004-05-03 ch 1, | Very, very true! Liars are both the spider and the fly. :) I like how you blended the two quotes - of course. Excellent! |
| nine iron 2004-04-29 ch 1, | Sort of like my "New Beginning" Poem, has the same idea. Yours is done much better though, it has major differences though. It is well written and very readable. Goof luck in all your works Nine Iron |