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| Oriel Kurosaki 2008-09-15 ch 12,   | oh, what a sweet story! I really loved it, and I couldn't stop reading until I finished it! Just one thing; you should really put some sort of break in between POV and scene changes. It got really confusing in some places. But that hardly mattered, since it was so fun to read. =] |
| Freak_779 2008-04-15 ch 12, | did i miss something? he does dye his hair back right? >.> otherwise, this story kept me from homework for three hours. it was amazing, thanks for writing! |
| nomy 2008-01-09 ch 12, | Finally i finished reading i think the 5th story of yours...i love your story! i love it so much! i finally finished reading this and i realize that i love all your writings..they are so damn good...!! and you make a connection to Finding Heaven..i love how you do that ..but make me sad as i never did finish reading Finding Heaven..but still i love it!! i love in the beginning of the story hoe Drake being cold and using voices for his insecurities as it normal for people to do that..and Jason character has a slight a knight in shining amour to his personality with his being Drake protector or some sort..and i notice that in your story that you tend to focus on the main character meaning you never drabble to other people, and for me i like it..as i tend to read story that focusing on the main love life than other people around them..call me picky or whatever but its just make it more confusing to read on other characters...just one question,is this the end of the coupling?... |
| HumanInfiltrator 2007-08-19 ch 12, | Sensei this was wonderful, I love your cross-overs! |
| papu 2007-08-08 ch 1, | did you know that in the title of your first chapter it says welcome to my live instead of welcome to my life? I haven't gotten much further... But i will. |
| poupre a monte 2007-05-28 ch 3, | super sexy story! love ya heather =]. so i wonder if this reveiw will get in touch with you? |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-25 ch 12, | This was a cute story ^_^ I had fun reading it. My only suggestions are to go through and fix some spelling and grammar errors, and maybe add a bit more detail to certain parts. But overall, a good read ^_^ |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-25 ch 11, | Destin's adorable ^_^ This was a nice light chapter :P Yay! Drake managed to cook something! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-22 ch 10, | This is a fun story to read ^_^ I'd like if there was more about the drama camp, but no matter, it's still good. One criticism though: Jason's mood swings don't make a lot of sense... Oh, well, ends well for Drake, doesn't it? :P |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-22 ch 9, | What a fun get-together :P I really like Tate ^_^ Sounds like drama's gonna be fun! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-21 ch 8, | I like the neighbours :P That should make things fun ^_^ Hm, I do like Drake's mum...she seems nicer lately...but Jack's a jerk. Oh, cool club name! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-21 ch 7, | Wow, must say the pair of them are a lot sappier than I thought :P That was quite the lime. Yay! They're getting an apartment!! |
| afk 2006-08-20 ch 12, | i ABSOLUTLY adored this story! iu read it in um 3 days because i've been busy but i couldn't stop! |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-13 ch 6, | Well, they all seemed a good deal happier this time round! Poor Vin...probably scarred for life, now... |
| Catseye*Rose 2006-08-11 ch 5, | Aw, this was a sweet angsty chapter ^_^ Wh00t! Piercings! Gotta love 'em :P |