|Reviews for Alter Ego|
| Chaotic Charisma 2/18/05 . chapter 1
My favorite so far. Faster rhythm, angsty, and not at all forced. Flows well. Slower-paced poems are easier to make flow, but this is my favorite of yours that I've read.
| Infinite Smiles 5/15/04 . chapter 1
I love the poem, but I am not sure that I like the format. I think it would have worked better, seperated at the slashes.
| mastermound 5/4/04 . chapter 1
this is one of the most unique things I have seen.. this is the first poem of yours I've read, and the ryme is incredable..honestly, the way you put it together is like nothing I have ever seen before, and I love it. It's very quick, very malodic... a true masterpiece... you get my rare approval... from the most over-confident-in-his-own-abilities man alive... I could never do anything that good...
| Shinji Boi69 5/4/04 . chapter 1
This was really good. I write lots of poems this length and lots even shorter. I think the length has nothing to do with a good poem. Haiku poems have only 17 syllables in them and some are really beautiful. This poem was wonderful and made very valid points. I really enjoyed reading this. The meaning behind it is very true. Keep up the amazing work.
You keep writing...
I'll keep reviewing.
| Shy Cutie89 4/29/04 . chapter 1
wow, awesome! flowed very nicely! i liked it a lot. thank you for the review and your poem is awesome. keep writing and have fun!